写作分提升慢怎么办?

2017-09-22 14:16:50 | 编辑:无 | 有680人参与 | 来自:匿名

在托福考试中,如果反复练习都不能带来成绩的提升,那么你再花多的时间来练习也得不到你预期的效果的。那么这里你就要换个思路。在托福写作当中这种情况就很常见了。当我们对独立写作的结构有基本的了解并看了相关范文后,我们也许会觉得自己的语言有一定局限性,进而导致分数进入瓶颈期,所以我们要为大家介绍几个句型供大家选择使用。

  例子:

  To begin with, by no means are we supposed to lose sight of the fact that it is much easier for people to get access to information nowadays. Due to the proliferation of hi-tech devices, such as smart phones with Internet connection, education is no longer restrained into traditional classroom. To be more specific, not only are people able to obtain resources in an extremely short period of time, but also, thanks to the proGREssive technology of storing data, various kinds of information is available online. Therefore, students are bestowed with more opportunities of self-training in the long term. A salient example can be used here to illustrate my point of view. I used to hate doing research since searching for information always took me a long time. However, since several years ago, I began enjoying collecting resources online, such as E-books and others’ thesis, sometimes with my smart phone. To be honest, it is a way full of pleasure and convenience, which denotes that education is a lot easier today.

  我们可以很容易的发现上面的文章结构跟我们平时讲解的一样,语言用词没有多么晦涩难懂,重点是结构比较清晰,字数也达标了,重点是有一些长难句式的套用,我们要说明一点:长句子不是ETS的最爱,但是长短句兼有确是作为一个语言类考试的必备条件,很能明白的是,如果全文没跑题且语法正确,但是都是简单句;然而另外一篇的没跑题且语法正确,长短句并存,后者肯定更受到考官青睐。请注意,我没有提到复杂点的晦涩难懂的词汇,比如GRE和SAT的词汇,都不是必要条件,如果有合适的情况适当写一些是可以的,但要写对!

  在以上段落中,我们看到了高中常见语法中的倒装句,否定词在句首,可以使用部分倒装,部分倒装的结构是 情态动词/助动词+主语+剩余动词 ,举例如下:

  By no means are we supposed to lose sight of the fact that it is much easier for people to get access to information nowadays.

  Never should we ignore the importance of mental health on children’s development.

  此外,我们还可以看到not only在句首的倒装结构,Not only 倒装,but also 不倒装

  Not only are people able to obtain resources in an extremely short period of time, but also, thanks to the progressive technology of storing data, various kinds of information is available online.

  Only 放在句首,也是一个常见的倒装句结。

  Only by taking diverse jobs can we truly know our abilities and interests.

  接下来,我再分享另外一个结构:悬垂结构,我更愿意称之为SVO, doing./Doing, SVO在这个结构中,我们要求句子只有一个主语S,一个主句SVO,而doing可以理解成是主语S的动作,或者是SVO这个句子引发的伴随状态,充当状语部分,例句如下:

  Walking on the street, I met an old friend.

  Most people are busy in their daily life, earning more money for their families.

  Thinking of the fact that more people tend to study English, schools set up English groups.

  Considering the fact that sharing ideas with net friends with various backgrounds can lead to numerous precious information, students can draw more precise conclusions and make wiser decisions while chatting online.

  Being impressed by WTO, China’s economy is growing stronger.

  同样,在最后这个句子中Being impressed by WTO, China’s economy is growing stronger. 是可以理解成主语China’s economy 和impressed是被动关系的,所以延伸出一个结构 SVO, done./Done, SVO.

  Impressed by WTO, China’s economy is growing stronger.

  以上就是小编为大家带来的托福写作遇到瓶颈如何突破写作高分的方法。一些托福写作高分句型还是要靠大家平时备考时多多的积累,希望这些可以帮助大家。

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